Wartorn now Bonds Unbreakable

I changed the name again. Once it was "The Coming Darkness", but I liked that title for one part instead of the entire thing.

So then it became "Wartorn", which worked as a temporary title, but I never really cared for it. If this was a book more about war than it was about the sisters, that would be fine. But it's not.

Finally, I think I like Bonds Unbreakable. I'll give it a week to see if it wears off. I'm not planning on changing it again, and I'm about to start work on the cover.

Wartorn

The entire story is now up, as is the poll for rating it.

Wartorn

Part 3 is done, and I'll get it up this week sometime, so the entire story will be available. I will be adding a new poll to decide on the title as well. I will probably put up a poll for people to rate the story also.

Wartorn

The Coming Darkness has been renamed Wartorn. The first part is now titled The Coming Darkness. Not sure if the name will stick, i'm still thinking it over.

Also, Part 2 of Wartorn has been added. Part 3 is through the first draft, and I'm working on the second. With any luck, it will be up next weekend. Again, feedback is appreciated.

Coming Darkness - Part 2

Part 2 is done and will be posted this weekend when I have more time to do so (have to edit when I put it on here to make it look readable).

Also been spending lunchtime working on Part 3.  On chapter 3 of probably about 6 chapters, and I'm only on the first draft, so I expect 3 weeks at least before it's up here.

Coming Darkness - Part 1...

...is now available.  See tab above.  Any feedback would be appreciated!

The Coming Darkness - Update

I've completed (mostly) the second draft of Part 2.  Just need to make sure I'm detailed enough.

Also want to review one aspect of Part 1 to cover some details.  Hopefully will complete this weekend and post Part 1 on here.  I'll also see how far I can get on Part 2, and might be able to post that by the following weekend.

The Coming Darkness

Second draft of part 1 has just been completed.  I hand-wrote the first draft of part 1, part 2, and most of part 3.  Didn't finish the last chapter of part 3 before working on typing the first part into Word.  I haven't yet decided how to play out the battle, but will by the time I get the rest typed in.

Sometimes I prefer to write out by hand first, which forces me to review rather thoroughly as I type it.  The downside is, when I get on a roll, I can't write as fast as I can type, so it slows me down horribly.  I'll post part one here this week.