I've run freely with this story for about as long as I can. Thirteen chapters in, nearly 20k words, and still a number of ideas for future chapters, but the book is lacking in overall purpose I'm afraid.
There are a couple of ideas I've tossed around for the overall arc, but neither has the "bite" I need. A stronger story is necessary, and so now a road map may be necessary as well. Regardless, it's time for more action to go with the passion.
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